Wednesday, 21 September 2011

Feedback on pitch

Initially, we pitched our idea to a classroom of students. In this presentation we contained the basic narrative of the film, some of the ideas we had for the poster, the target audience we thought i was for, theory/approaches and lastly a film profile. however, one slide which we did not contain in out presentation was representation of gender/age etc, and also conventions of a typical horror film.
After this was completed, we asked the group for some feedback and things we could improve in our pitch. common feedback which we received was our tagline. 'live what you dream' did not appeal to the audience and would not make them watch the film, therefore we have to think about another tagline which can include.  Also in our film we included some shots which contain partly naked shots, the audience therefore asked how we was planning to produce these shots. Our Response was shoot using actors wearing swimming suits.
The audience, found it hard to understand whether we could produce the film in the space of 5 minutes.

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